critique me!!!!

hello Lawler
well i've been working in the s-curves project we have, but i think this is going to be more challenging, im really exited about this project and i think i have a good idea for the pictures but since i dont have a place to take pictures of smoke so i'll have to produce the smoke in photoshop wich is something i've never done before but i hope i can do it in a way that looks good and realistic...
i haven't started witk my self-guided 2 but im planing on starting it this week or during the weekend
i am bored and i need to find cheap film for my polaroid instant camera(if anyone nows about someone who has film)

critique me!!!

critique me!!!!!

update

well i have been working in some stuff this last weeks, i have been working finishing the tutorials for recreating the way photograpies used to look like at the beggining of photography, sadly Lawler is kind of bad at making tutorials so some stuff didnt make sense or at least it doesnt make sense to me so im doing the best i can and it is actually not looking that bad so im happy with it. i need to start taking my pictures for my selfguided and the pictures for the recreating the old types pictures. this picture is the Vandyke recreation i did i hope u like it.

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